my target

finish of my dialogue

About young dracula

i seen young Dracula series 1 episode 1. It has good script, especial for kids because it its short and its not hard and it wont confuse them to remember. Its a long script and a long episode and its hard for kids to act for so long. I think the script is good, But not that good. It should include most of the action in nearly all the scenes. It should better because it's a bit boring and it's only talking and talking in the few episodes it needs to be more action. In episode 1 of young Dracula tells that they are new to the neighborhood and they live a castle and the boy doesn't like it.    

structure of my documentary

 We will walk around where there is lots of people and in our local school.The beginning is we will ask people does action video game affect you or anyone. In the middle we will have a record of people who play action video games and a record of people who don't. At the end we will show the percent of people who do and the percent of people who don't play action video games. At the end we will go back and ask people to give a bit of their opinion about the affect of their or other people behavior. 

Talk about violence games on technology.

does violent games affect teenagers, adults, children's?
yes Violent games does effect teenagers because they play it. When they go outside they do it for real like this two guys in 1999 went into a school with a gun and killed 20 people.